Second rendering. Unsure about this one. On the plus side it's soft like a 19th century landscape painting. On the downside, feels disjointed, the sky and landscape aren't shaking hands like I want. The focal point should be the pool at the back garden and the relationship with the house. But the damn sky! Stealing attention and splitting the image. My opinion goes back and forth ...sometimes you have to let it go and re-visit later.